Magic's in her touch and eyes.
It's evident my momma tries
To make my every wish come true;
She compliments the good I do.
She's always there when needed most;
Yes, I'm the child my momma boast.
Together we have weathered storms,
Accepting life with opened arms.
She makes my world more hassle-free,
Omitting not my thoughts nor me.
Although we're many miles apart,
My mom and I are close at heart.
There will never be just one day
To send a card a gift to say
"I love you," 'cause
Every day is my "Mother's Day" to me.
What do you think about this poem? "Mothers' Day"?
That is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:I LOVE IT IF I WAS A MOM AND YOU GAVE THAT TO ME I WOULD GIVE YOU A BIG HUGE..........
Reply:hey that was an awsome and beautiful poem
Reply:Beautiful poem! Why don't you submit it and some others to Hallmark and other card publishers?
Reply:awesome!
Reply:Another nice one!!!!!!Keep it up.
Reply:Sweet. Very sweet. Make sure your mom sees it.
P.S.: Drop the "to me" from last line. Not needed.
Reply:WOW
i love it ^^
Wednesday, February 1, 2012
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